[閒聊] 伏筆或是硬拗?大家怎麼判斷?已回收
最近看到板上有人在酸海賊王的伏筆,突然有感而發
所謂的伏筆,說穿了就是前後呼應,在前面的某些設定到了後來能夠發揮作用
但是卻也有作家曾經表示:所謂的伏筆,其實是他們在創作過程中,回頭翻一下前面的劇情,看看哪些是可利用的才拿來前後呼應,並不是一開始就想好。
姑且不談這種方法算不算伏筆,各位認為怎麼樣的情況能夠算伏筆?
我個人在這邊先拋磚引玉,以大家討論的海賊王為例
有個東西我認為就是伏筆,神不神不列入考量,那個伏筆就是D
蒙奇D魯夫,哥爾D羅傑,波特卡斯D艾斯
這很明顯就是作者想用這個D搞事,雖然非常明顯也沒啥驚訝感,但這確實就是伏筆的一種~
另外一個我認為有伏筆的小說是全職高手
輪迴戰隊,周澤愷的神槍手跟蘇沐秋的神槍手等等
這一段我會覺得作者佈局的很合理,不會有突兀硬拗的感覺
那面,大家來說說看,你們對伏筆或是硬拗的看法?
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