[英中] 翻譯練習

看板Translation作者 (專心準備考試囉)時間13年前 (2011/01/10 00:09), 編輯推噓2(206)
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想請教各位大大~ 剛剛在瀏覽一個介紹英文書信的網站~ 他有教導如何撰寫一篇有關"Customer Revival, Product Sales"的範本 內文大致應該是致信客戶了解為何客戶許久未有音訊~並藉此透露公司有新產品的訊息~ 我想請問這個"Customer Revival" 要怎麼用中文來解釋? 是指"客戶的再次拜訪"還是什麼? 因為看他原文範本是這樣寫: Dear It has been so long since we have had the opportunity to be of service to you, that I have begun to wonder if perhaps, we have offended you in some way in the past. If this is the case, I would greatly appreciate knowing what happened. In fact, if you have any grievance with our firm, I wish that you would call so that we might discuss the problem. 謝謝解惑~非常感激~ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.240.232.17

01/10 00:15, , 1F
現在流行的講法是:客戶回購率
01/10 00:15, 1F

01/10 00:16, , 2F
(不過每次看到都跟認知中的回購搞混)
01/10 00:16, 2F

01/10 00:17, , 3F
樓上大大所謂的認知有差是什麼意思? ^^
01/10 00:17, 3F

01/10 00:18, , 4F
早一點則是流行叫作(商品/顧客)迴轉率
01/10 00:18, 4F

01/10 00:19, , 5F
以前我們在交易上講回購,指的是購回
01/10 00:19, 5F

01/10 00:19, , 6F
請問If this is the case可以翻作"若是這樣的話..." 嗎?
01/10 00:19, 6F

01/10 00:21, , 7F
這麼說好了,這種信件我不會用那樣的中文措辭。
01/10 00:21, 7F

01/10 00:24, , 8F
不過l大真的很厲害~翻譯成客戶回購率~感覺很準確和專業~
01/10 00:24, 8F
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文章代碼(AID): #1DATsjNM (Translation)