Re: [心得] editor怒了
依照許多前輩的意見, 經過一個早上的修改, 結果如下:
The electrochemical passive properties of AlxCoCrFeNi alloys in sulfuric acids
in 20-65 oC were investigated. Icorr obtained from potentiodynamic polarization
increasing with x was further discussed by the fitting data of Arrhenius
equation in terms of Icorr = A exp(-Ea/RT). Although both the pre-exponential
factor and activation energy increase with x, the pre-exponential factor
affects Icorr more than activation energy when T > 27 oC. The results of EIS
and weight-loss tests explained Icorr increasing with x in sulfuric acid owing
to the inferior porous protection oxide film of Al in these alloys.
我知道PhD版不是這樣用的, 但是參照大家給的建議, 如果這樣的''架構''能讓大家比較
了解, 那所剩下''文法修辭上的盲點'', 應該比較好找人polish. 再麻煩大家了, 真的很
謝謝大家, 讓我感到很窩心 :).
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