Re: [心得] editor怒了
In this study, the electrochemical passive properties of AlxCoCrFeNi
alloys in sulfuric acids at 20 - 65 oC were investigated
by means of the potentiodynamic polarization, EIS, and immersion weight
loss tests. The Icorr results suggest that the corrosion current density
increased with increasing Al content,
As a result, at T >27 oC, "A", the ____factor, ａffected the __ more than
Ea (), and Al is harmful to the corrosion resistance, owing to its
inferior porous protection oxide films in these alloys.
因為有些地方不懂作者要表達的，所以試著改成這樣，請參考。
可能要注意說，科技英文要多用被動語態。所以有些論文編修不一定可以幫到你。
避免囉嗦的句子，一定要多用轉折詞。
文中有說道Ａ比Ｅａ更重要，這句話用中文講是通的，但是寫成英文很奇怪，
對什麼更重要，所以應該改成，影響什麼比較多。
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