Re: [心得] 對魯缺這段無感
這一集的父與子線依舊吐血...
上次已經說過鋪陳問題很大
像一步禪空跟錦煙霞如果沒有從相見相忘的衝突
跟後來擋下尚同會屠殺魔兵及臥底黑瞳事件慢慢溶化阿霞傲嬌的心(?
類似這種強烈情感的角色要有足夠的故事長度去述說
有些推文提到很能體會父親這種強硬的期望變成壓力
但故事不就是要讓大多數觀眾而不是只有特定人能夠感同身受不是嗎
相信很多人也都有家人期望自己能夠做到哪些哪些但不一定能如願
如人飲水 冷暖自知
想說這集雖然是三搶二的老梗但也該加入更多的旁述或回憶
可是我看了啥
本來怒氣沖沖要帶回小玉並想報仇的劍無極跳出來反對犧牲魯缺
(即使風間始反對報仇,即使提出少了父母的心情你們最了解)
連結性低到沒有共鳴
聽大匠師講出他們都是我的親人 難道我不痛苦嗎
這時若能補上魯缺承受壓力的痛苦對比離開後廢蒼生獨自在破窯的落寞
風間始的到來讓他慢慢回想起自己當初對待兒子的方式是不是太過苛刻
還有小玉自幼沒雙親.廢蒼生的內疚疏離跟大匠師的關愛
種種情感交錯將這些複雜的糾結表達出來
讓魯缺的恨、廢蒼生的後悔、小玉的故做開朗、大匠師的守護能夠立體
連續性地帶起觀眾的情緒去投入
我想會好過三人在昏迷夢境中三人對質
我恨你 對不起我錯了 好好照顧小玉 阿公~
亮點反而是在玄狐這邊
銀燕的下跪對比之前的無腦衝動不錯
只是你的尊嚴又值幾多錢呢
玄狐心中的不滿是自己原來只是有利用價值
除了工具人什麼都不是
這邊我覺得等阿霞破封後可以幫你開專屬戀愛教室
她可是當了百年的工具人
18年來頭皮癢不能抓你們誰能體會
溫皇就不用多說了
原來他的輪椅是由配劍無雙做的(名字哪邊有提過啊想不起來)
難怪被圍殺的時候turbo開那麼大
可用段數12 好車、好車~
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啊對啦
難怪我一直想說好像忘記打什麼
這集的鐘聲敲太多次了 追...(x
誰能跟我講一下這位魚啊太子到底做了啥自以為的事情
墨家老五跟雁王懷疑鱗王詐死
但他們目標從來就是放在殺欲星移啊
然後封閉海境之後魚太子就游出去
到處跟人說我是海境現在的王喔趕快把東西還我
幹了這麼多莫名其妙的事只為了假裝低調說自己是王
好讓海境不會被懷疑 就只是這樣嗎
飛淵還一副很懂的樣子 這...
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問題是人家根本不鳥他是誰
重點是師相跟海境
還是他自以為出去這樣晃一圈人家就覺得海境不簡單還是不要打好了 = =?
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※ 編輯: justblackJ (111.248.46.100), 09/02/2015 23:16:01
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