[期刊] 被打槍了~~~
除了我自己的疏忽外~~~
這個reviewer真的覺得我的文章寫得粉爛吧~~~~
JPP我也已經上了兩篇了~~沒想到第3篇打擊這麼大~~~~~
再找別篇期刊吧~~~~~
Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author:
Reviewer: 1
Comments to the Author
Written English needs vast improvement. At present the grammar/language is
of an unacceptably low quality.
References. Ref 2: Herman, K. should by Krier, H. - you've got the names
backwards. Ref 3: you have a problem with the quotations.
Refs 4-8 are completely unrelated to the present work;
they are just FEM papers in different thermal stress applications.
Reference work relevant to your manuscript.
Previous work on FEM/thermal calculations and stress/thermal measurements
in rocket motors, insulators, and propellant grains.
Value. What is the value or novelty of this work?
The authors have applied a heat transfer condition to the inside of
an annulus and performed a black box ANSYS FEM calculation for the
stress distribution in the annulus. In my opinion, this is not a
publishable result but rather an undergraduate student project.
The results are not generalized for non-specific materials,
variation in motor case thickness, etc.
I see very little value in this work. The limited results are specific
to the chosen parameters
and this can be easily done by nearly anyone with ANSYS and a BS
in mechanical engineering.
Technical. What is the applied pressure on the insulator? I assume zero.
This is purely a thermal stress calculation? Why vary insulator thickness
but not also motor case thickness? Won't this influence the 0.6 cm
thickness criteria for insulator thickness? Why the sharp changes in
stress in the first 4 seconds? You should show a thermal
loading (temperature, heat flux, other) graph to explain.
But my biggest problem is that this work lacks value for nearly all readers.
This is simple black box FEM analysis on a thermally loaded annulus.
Reviewer: 2
Comments to the Author
(There are no comments.)
--
※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc)
◆ From: 219.70.5.61
推
11/05 17:45, , 1F
11/05 17:45, 1F
→
11/05 18:01, , 2F
11/05 18:01, 2F
→
11/05 18:05, , 3F
11/05 18:05, 3F
推
11/05 18:11, , 4F
11/05 18:11, 4F
→
11/05 18:12, , 5F
11/05 18:12, 5F
→
11/05 18:13, , 6F
11/05 18:13, 6F
→
11/05 18:13, , 7F
11/05 18:13, 7F
→
11/05 18:14, , 8F
11/05 18:14, 8F
→
11/05 18:15, , 9F
11/05 18:15, 9F
→
11/05 18:15, , 10F
11/05 18:15, 10F
→
11/05 18:16, , 11F
11/05 18:16, 11F
推
11/05 18:25, , 12F
11/05 18:25, 12F
推
11/05 21:07, , 13F
11/05 21:07, 13F
推
11/05 21:35, , 14F
11/05 21:35, 14F
→
11/05 21:37, , 15F
11/05 21:37, 15F
→
11/05 21:38, , 16F
11/05 21:38, 16F
→
11/05 21:39, , 17F
11/05 21:39, 17F
推
11/05 23:15, , 18F
11/05 23:15, 18F
※ cjws80293:轉錄至某隱形看板 11/05 23:41
推
11/06 00:56, , 19F
11/06 00:56, 19F
推
11/06 03:34, , 20F
11/06 03:34, 20F
→
11/06 03:35, , 21F
11/06 03:35, 21F
→
11/06 03:35, , 22F
11/06 03:35, 22F
推
11/06 04:20, , 23F
11/06 04:20, 23F
→
11/06 04:21, , 24F
11/06 04:21, 24F
→
11/06 04:22, , 25F
11/06 04:22, 25F
→
11/06 04:24, , 26F
11/06 04:24, 26F
→
11/06 04:25, , 27F
11/06 04:25, 27F
→
11/06 07:25, , 28F
11/06 07:25, 28F
推
11/06 09:31, , 29F
11/06 09:31, 29F
→
11/06 11:12, , 30F
11/06 11:12, 30F
→
11/06 11:13, , 31F
11/06 11:13, 31F
→
11/06 11:14, , 32F
11/06 11:14, 32F
→
11/06 11:16, , 33F
11/06 11:16, 33F
推
11/07 00:17, , 34F
11/07 00:17, 34F
→
11/07 19:08, , 35F
11/07 19:08, 35F
→
11/07 19:09, , 36F
11/07 19:09, 36F
→
11/08 08:54, , 37F
11/08 08:54, 37F
討論串 (同標題文章)
以下文章回應了本文 (最舊先):
期刊
2
7
期刊
2
10
完整討論串 (本文為第 1 之 8 篇):
期刊
11
37
期刊
2
7
期刊
2
10
期刊
17
50
期刊
7
9
期刊
12
59
期刊
6
12
期刊
5
12