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2F→: 小說人物互動除了象徵做不出來之外 其他都能正面側面去11/03 00:40
3F→: 描寫幾乎所有事情 看你要怎麼用而已 說人物互動是小說11/03 00:41
4F→: 的靈魂之一也不為過11/03 00:41
18F→:都會奇幻絕對不是台灣發明的10/08 21:00
1F推:我只希望我以後退休時還有那個餘力可以寫小說....04/01 22:58
2F→:大家經驗都差不多吧 我還是學生時寫小說被酸風花雪月04/01 23:00
3F→:也是被"興趣能當職業嗎"這句話堵死 乖乖去唸理工04/01 23:01
4F→:不過 這個連勞工都不照顧的政府 我無法期待他對更弱勢的04/01 23:01
5F→:創作族群有啥改變的契機 尤其是那個非常詭異的文化部...04/01 23:02
6F推:這種東西你去找本講劇本寫作方法論的書看就好了 比較省03/30 09:21
38F推:恭喜你 能體會到這點表示你又往前走了一步10/08 23:04
4F→:謝謝~ 其實是剛好有在想類似的題目 所以這次寫的快些07/06 10:16
30F→:這樣講好了 我會想來這裡寫徵文只有兩種情況：07/16 01:08
31F→:1.我只是想寫東西的原始衝動 2.我想練筆的練習之一07/16 01:09
32F→:在這裡的練習確實是對你要讓"整本小說"的概念成形幫助不07/16 01:09
33F→:大 但是這些練習是很基本的 等於是讓自己回到起點的動作07/16 01:10
34F→:有時候大大小小的東西寫了很多 回過頭去也能學到東西07/16 01:10
35F→:像這裡五千字的限制會讓我不得不把原本會習慣長段的的述07/16 01:12
36F→:事手法濃縮 但是對某些需要掌握節奏的部份來講這也需要07/16 01:12
37F→:以上純屬個人嘴砲07/16 01:14
58F推:我覺得為了要控制敘事節奏 懂得濃縮的手法是必要的07/17 22:54
59F→:你所謂的搞知識的濃縮跟搞小說的濃縮是不一樣的東西07/17 22:55
60F→:如果每段都是長段 那你如何用篇幅去突顯出你想著力的部07/17 22:56
61F→:份或是想營造出的主題? 當然你可以用不同的方法去做 但07/17 22:57
62F→:不代表這個方法一無可取到不顯眼07/17 22:58
1F推:兩種文體多讀一些其實就分得出來了 要清楚定義反而挶限05/20 15:10
2F→:因為也有小說類型偏好散文的筆法 或是得獎散文是用小說05/20 15:10
3F→:的架構去砌出一個世界觀後再佐以散文的書寫方式05/20 15:11
6F推:散文的寬鬆定義就是"抒寫自己想法的文體"05/20 15:27
43F推: 紅樓夢超棒的 不讀嗎 (被踢飛12/09 10:45
52F→:金瓶梅用腦補就好啦 還好我經過嚴格ACG腦補訓練 (爆)12/09 10:48
53F→:外行看熱鬧 內行看門道 小說能寫成這樣才算厲害啊(姆指12/09 10:49
56F→:桑尼請說吧 (下潛中12/09 10:50
62F→:好啦 昨天討論什麼? 我昨晚沒上線的說..(上浮中12/09 10:50
68F→:等一下 先從定義來 所謂"ACG族群的角度"是指?12/09 10:52
69F→:敘事語調用ACG族群的口吻來寫嗎?12/09 10:53
82F推:如果角度是要解釋成觀點的話 那我覺得是有可能的12/09 10:59
83F→:但是如果是a大舉例的情況 我比較認同a大的意見12/09 10:59
87F→:對 比方說像現視研就是個很成功的例子12/09 11:02
88F→:反過來講 嚴肅小說的重點在於你想表達什麼12/09 11:02
89F→:觀點或是角度的選擇與否在於能不能確實突顯出你想講的12/09 11:03
96F→:成功摹寫現實是必要條件之一 但不是充份條件...12/09 11:07
97F→:訊息還是要有的 至少知道自己想寫啥 這是我的想法啦..12/09 11:07
99F→:那不行吧? 要知道自己想寫什麼 才能抓要強調的場景出來12/09 11:09
102F→:寫身邊事之類的沒有經過這種挑選的話 無異於流水帳..12/09 11:10
106F推:嗯 你講雪國的話 確實也是有這種經典沒錯...12/09 11:12
108F→:就我淺薄的寫作經驗來講 寫格局龐大的東西時其實很難去12/09 11:14
109F→:精準控制你想寫的每個訊息 所以通常都是抓住一個主要精12/09 11:14
110F→:神 然後在自己邊寫邊貼近那個精神過程中讓訊息自由發展12/09 11:15
113F→:最後初稿寫完後 回來看自己讀到什麼沒有在意料中但卻表12/09 11:15
114F→:達出來的訊息 在後面的改寫時再加以強化這樣12/09 11:16
115F→:所以我覺得一開始寫的主旨是不會變的 要抓住一個方向12/09 11:16
116F→:至於後面訊息出來的量多寡 端看寫完後怎麼處理這些文字12/09 11:17
118F→:桑尼你去文學版面問 搞不好會有比較有價值的答案 wwww12/09 11:18
121F→:我只能就我搆得到的水平來講這回事而已...12/09 11:18
124F→:ewriter也可以啊 至少那邊的版友都有實戰經驗了 XD12/09 11:19
129F→:囧 語氣誠懇一點 避開版規 應該是不至於會被劣吧...12/09 11:21
131F→:事實上我在試圖作這回事中 不過第一次出來的作品很慘..12/09 11:22
133F→:中文系的同學讀完後的評語是:"整篇沒有焦點"12/09 11:23
134F→:所以我才會覺得還是要主旨先行 精確知道自己想寫什麼12/09 11:24
135F→:是手法搭配目的 不是目的遷就手法12/09 11:24
142F→:XDDDDDDDDDDDD 不小心反應出自己的苦悶了嗎12/09 11:26
145F→:加入ACG術語實在是沒必要 除非你是想用ACG術語營造什麼12/09 11:26
149F→:這樣聽起來還蠻有梗的耶 wwwww12/09 11:28
154F→:可惜了...12/09 11:30
155F→:驚 這表示a大你的潛意識是想...!? (超大誤)12/09 11:30
159F→:同感 桑尼這樣講我第一個想到的是小說降生十二星座...12/09 11:36
42F→:第四人稱應該類似全知觀點的一種吧07/16 11:39