[請問] 英文翻譯求修正
不曉得有板友願意幫忙看看這段翻譯哪裡需要大修呢?
才比較合乎一般用法 謝謝
對於收到的商品感到失望。
可能是紙箱沒有填充飽滿，導致商品在長途運送中遭受碰撞，
所以收到的商品外觀磨損、壓痕不少，
標明為全新的商品卻像是舊東西一樣, 雖然商品內容物是全新的但外觀卻很糟糕。
如下圖：
因此對於亞馬遜本次的包裝非常失望，希望能有改善的空間。
I am so disappointed to this received goods.
Maybe the cardboard box don't fill full,
resulting in the goods on the long distance to deliver suffer the injury.
So the appearance of received goods have many scar, wear down, pressings.
It's like an old things , not 「new」.
Although the content is new, but the appearance is poor.
As shown below:
So, I am disappointed to Amazon's this packing
and hope to have the improved space.
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