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看板TOEFL_iBT作者jinguo (想厝的心情)時間7年前 (2016/07/28 14:59)推噓26(26推 0噓 4→)

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考到W28(GG)我不意外，因為我作文練20-30篇。寫到後來，整合寫作真的都會背了。因為有板友站內信詢問，我就乾脆分享出來。我的寫作就是跟著送佛Karen老師跟Austin 老師給的建議寫的 Austin說獨立寫作最重要就是審題。不能離題。不能偏題。主題句要明顯清楚點出來理由。例如以下的題目。 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 我會解讀成這樣。關鍵字: success in job => relate well to people=> agree? 所以，我的立場是立場: Agree 理由一: more opportunities in job promotion 理由二: greater business development 然後，我的第一段就會變成 Although….., I believe…. . The reason is that…1..In addition, ...2... Hence, I agree/disagree with the statement that…. Although it is very important for students to study hard, I believe that knowing more people to expand the network is more vital than studying. The reason is that knowing more people, especially professionals bring more opportunities in job promotion. In addition, having wider network benefits in business development. Hence, I agree with this statement that for success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Body 段落，就是要解釋理由。所以我通常會直述理由，再用一句加以解釋理由。第三句就開始講例子。通常例子是否豐富就是得分的關鍵，所以，我寧可寫兩段body好好的交代清楚我的內容，而非三段。 First, relating well to people is a great skill to learn because one could stand out easily in the job field. That is to say having better skills in managing people is more crucial to one’s career than academic studying. For example, Mark is a social person who knows how to interact with people, while Sean is shy. Both of them were my college friends. After graduation, he got a job in a multinational company and six months later, he became a project leader in the company. His boss saw his capability in terms of communication and coordination, so he got more opportunities to prove himself at job. On the other hand, Sean performed as well as Mark in school. However, he is shy and doesn’t like to hangout with people. Though he also worked in the same company, he didn’t have equal chance to be promoted due to his personality. In addition, expanding wider network can be beneficial to the business development. In other words, having a good ability to relate to people is very essential for someone who hopes to be an entrepreneur. For example, Tony Chen, a famous investment expertise in Taiwan, has very good relationship with other people in his community, so he has a lot of opportunities to persuade many of them to invest in his fund pools. Though he didn’t have very good academic performance, he could still gather much money and earn lot from people he know. Today, he is one of the richest people in Taiwan by only managing financial investments. 我的結論段，就是將我的首段在換句話說一下而已。 In conclusion, based on the above reasons, I believe that the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school due to the benefits of having more opportunities in job advancement and business expansion. Therefore, I agree with this statement that people will be more successful if they relate to people well than studying in school. 因為第一段跟最後一段實在是寫太多遍了。所以，對於句型結構我很熟練。考試時，我都是先寫中間兩段的內容發展，然後在回來寫前後段。時間上面的分配，我會大概都先花5分鐘構思，不會馬上看到題目就拼命打字，以免自己想的不夠周全，寫到一半又要改。中間整個內容大約我會花20分鐘拼命寫，不會去管打字或者文法的問題。最後的5分鐘，我會將我的文章重讀一遍，將所有的句子順過去。確認沒有typo也沒有簡單的文法錯誤。文章已長，整合寫作，下次分享。先祝大家考試順利! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 101.12.16.94 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/TOEFL_iBT/M.1469689195.A.D6E.html

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