[請益] 10/13 獨立寫作想法
今天寫獨立寫作的時候 題目反複看了好多次
老實說 我覺得自己其實有看但沒有懂 題目看越多次就越糊塗
剛剛忍不住再把JJ的範文拿出來看一次 發現兩個題目有個地方不一樣!
JJ: it is much easier to achieve success "with" help from one's family
than what is like before.
今天: is it easier to achieve success "without" one's family
than in the past?
現在回想起來 就是"with"跟"without"的差別搞得我在寫的時候很不順!
我考試時的困難點:是不是一定要以"沒有家庭幫助為前提" 討論過去與現在的情況?
而我寫下論點是:
1.現在貧富差距比以前大很多 有強大家庭幫助 就有難被超越的優勢 (比如接受好的教育)
2.強大的家族他們自然而然會幫助他們的下一代繼續保有優勢 這是很難避免的事
寫的時候一直很猶豫 因為我當下很想只討論"有無家庭幫助的差別" (這感覺比較好寫)
但我不敢! 因為如果只討論它而沒有考慮"以前跟現在" 那感覺就離題了
而如果將"以前vs現在""有家庭幫助vs無家庭幫助"四種情況一同考慮 那就變得很複雜!
(我很懷疑是不是我頭昏了想太多 對題目太鑽牛角尖了)
結果三心兩意中 最後只完成前三段加第四段開頭半句話共291個字 = ="
請問大家...這樣寫會有機會F嗎?
寫的落落長 是想問大家對今天的題目有什麼想法?
很想知道大家怎麼去思考和展開自己的論點
其實要我現在再重寫一次 我還是想不到很有力的論點阿!
謝謝大家
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