Re: [少年] 食戟之靈
我覺得這部漫畫目前最大的缺點是......
主線進行太快了!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(柯南請檢討一下)
老實說,很多地方支線可以好好發展啊,
例如校園戀愛、人物的背景刻畫等等....
結果目前主角是一直過關斬將,雖然很流暢,但很難給人帶入感啊
目前主角群除了創真、小惠、肉魅....其他極星寮那些人物根本沒一個記得住名字
每次人物出場之後就像免洗的一樣,那個青梅竹馬也是忽然蹦出來,又消失..
那個什麼遠月十杰,是個還不錯的設定,但人物每個都沒深度的刻畫
話說最近一話在打桌球,但是這不叫支線,這叫懶得想劇情在偷懶啊啊啊啊!!!!!!!!!
只能說,主編可能是新手吧
劇情不是一直推進就好,在推進的過程要讓人感受到張力啊。
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