Re: [翻譯] 可否幫我看看 , 英文履歷是否有誤 ?
: I come from Nan Tou. My father worked in the Taiwan Provincial Government
: before he died and my mother is housekeeping. I was born in a family of
My late father was a civil servant of the then Taiwan
Provincial Government. My mother is a housewife.
: comfortable means. I have four elder sisters, one younger sister and one
: elder brother. They get married and start a career.
"a family of comfortable means" 是什麼？另外我建議不要列舉你有幾個姊姊妹妹。
I have five siblings and all of them are married.
: I worked in the computer science and electronic field after graduation. I was
: working in an electron company before . The company has about forty computers
After graduation, my first job was a system administrator
in the computer and electronics industry.
I was in charge of 40 computers in a total.
: that were controlled by me alone. I maintained the server and pc hardware and
: software in Taipei head office . I installed service about dhcp, dns,
: terminal service, vpn etc. in the server and I set up to update the virus
: scan software protect against the server and network computers. In all, I
My duty was to troubleshoot software and hardware problems for the
servers and desktop PCs installed in the corporate's head office in Taipei.
I had to manage various network services such as DHCP, DNS, VPN and
terminal servers. I was also reponsible for the installation of computer
virus scanning software to maintain the security of our corporate network.
: modified to maintained the ERP system so I controlled software and hardware
: very well. I prepared MCSE and TCSE lessons in UCOM education center before.
To facilitate the software and hardware management, I modified our corporate's
ERP system such that ...... (自己加一些成就).
: I studied it for six months and I got MCSE, MCSA, MCP and TCSE finally, I
: hope to develop my skill very well in future company.
我覺得不需要講自己在哪裡補習。
I obtained several IT-related certificates including
MCSE, MCSA, MCP and TCSE, which I believe would be of great usefulness
for (你想投履歷的公司名稱).
: I like swimming, traveling, table tennis and reading fiction. There are many
I like swimming, traveling, playing table tennis and reading fictions.
: countries including Thailand, Malaysia , Australian , China, Japan, Vietnam
: and Singapore that I traveled before . My dream is traveling over the world
: in the future .
Speaking of travelling, I have had chances to visit many countries already
including ....... One of my dreams is to be able to visit every
countries of the world.
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