Re: [翻譯] 可否幫我看看 , 英文履歷是否有誤 ?
: My name is kevin chen, I was born in Nan Tou , on March 21st, 1963, 1977. I
不需要把幾月幾號都寫出來。Why 1963 and 1977?
: spent my childhood, school years and my adulthood there.I have fifth
: siblings.. My family is part of who I am today. I have always been a high
I was born and raised in Nan Tou.
"My family is part of who I am today" 是啥意思？
I have five siblings.
: achiever. My favorite subject at school was electronic engineering which
: aroused my interests to computer design and . I was a member of the swiming
: and the while pursuing my studies and have been an active member of them for
: the last few years.
My favorite subject at school was electronic engineering because
I was fascinated by computer design when I was a kid. I was a member of
my school's swimming team......
: It's been said,” Never put off till tomorrow what may be done today.”
: Therefore, I do a lot of Where there is a will, there is a way.
不知道這段要說什麼？
: In my school years, I had learned how to get along with others. As an adult,
I learnt how to get along with others at school.
: I have learned to respect myself as well. I truly enjoy spending my leisure
作文要有連貫的語意。前一句講的是和別人相處，後一句說尊敬自己。連不太起來。
: time with my family as well as surfing on the swimming . I believe that we
surfing on the swimming? 這是啥？
: should live life to its fullest capacity and cherish all that it gives us.
很中文化的感覺。你想說什麼？
: I am a nice person. My work experience has given me the chance to train
: myself to be A contented mind is a perpetual feast and . I feel that both
"I am a nice person" 和前後文完全搭不上。
My work experience 開始這整句都看不太懂。
:these traits are important in both our social and work environment.
: With my outstanding credentials and background, I believe that I could be a
: productive member of Production Supervisor as a/an factory supervisor and to
: grow proud with you.
前文並沒有講太多 credentials 和 background，所以有一點論述薄弱的感覺。讀者
感覺不到 outstanding 在哪裡。
I believe 開始這一串，語意完全不明。
※ 編輯: hoch 來自: 120.126.36.193 (04/27 14:41)
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