Re: [心得] 大唐雙龍傳─不能認同歷史的必然性
結果你還是沒有搞懂一個最嚴重的問題
很多人都點了出來,黃易在大唐把天下跟武林結合的太深了
各門各派哪個不是武林高手?
可不這樣寫,要怎連結到最後決定天下屬誰的玄武門之變?
這可是武俠小說「大唐雙龍傳」阿,又不是陳某的火鳳燎原
你說的寇仲、徐子凌各專一線
無外就是寇仲不斷經營版圖、徐子凌經由女角們引導而在各勢力間遊走
然後寇仲線就不會超人化嗎?
除非設定他武功就比平常人強一點,他的對手也不是武林高手
這樣的寇仲有什麼特色? 在玄武門之變時他又是什麼角色?
但換成美人兒軍師、幫主拓展地盤,就算在玄武門之變沒角色也沒有任何問題會出現
單騎破千軍當然很爽,常山趙子龍會這麼紅不是沒有道理的
武俠小說之所以難寫,就是因為不能無限提升能力、也不能碰到戰爭
武俠小說碰到戰爭最困難的地方,就在於「斬首」的無解
這點雙龍合作殺敵首領,在大唐前期就有玩過一次了
像覆雨就有版友問過,龐班為什麼不直接去砍死老朱就好了?
還要派大弟子進去臥底,小魔師還在那搞一堆有的沒的計劃
整個正派武林圍起來都打不贏的人物,言靜庵還要送上自己親愛的弟子靳冰雲去餵食安撫
武俠小說作者最主要的工作,就是讓讀者看的很爽,但又忘了跟現實矛盾的問題
就像浪翻雲後期的掃台,老黃怎掃也沒有讓他碰到戰爭的事
不然就不是韓柏力擋千軍,而是明軍屁滾尿流了
接天之戀前:
朱元璋的眼神不懷好意#Q#(OS:小夢遙你跑不掉了,吃不到你師傅也要吃了你)
秦夢遙:這是師尊叫我交給你的一樣東西(遞字條)
「浪翻雲、龐班在你背後很火大」
朱元璋:我本來想不計一切把夢遙吃掉,可是XXXXXXX
我真是愧對靜庵當初對我的期許跟幫助阿
(OS:幹 當個皇帝把個妹錯了嗎)
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再次說明,讓女角去拓地盤,最主要就是讓讀者忘了武俠跟戰爭的矛盾
老黃都己經設定好了美人兒幫主、軍師、場主了...
當初雙龍合力刺殺敵大將時,這部大唐就己經沒救了
當時的肉腳雙龍都能這樣幹了,李世民大概寫到5X級時己經被一堆要他命的殺死一萬次了
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