Re: [求譯] 一段句子
※ 引述《vocalsinger (不停的走)》之銘言：
: 求英譯：
: ‧ According to Harold C. Schonberg, “Musical Vienna was divided on the
: merits of the Eroica. Some called it Beethoven’s masterpiece. Others said
: that the work merely illustrated a striving for originality that did not come
: off.”
: 我的試譯：
: Harold C. Schonberg說:維也納的音樂由英雄的價值所分割.有些人說他是貝多芬的大
: 作.
: 其他人說此作品僅僅說明了表現出努力的獨創性
: 提問：
: 我覺得文句有點不通順@@請問其他人有更好的翻譯句子嗎?謝謝你們不吝指教!
was divided on the merits of something
=was divided on whether or not something is a good idea
did not come off 你沒有翻到
這裡的come off應該是to be successful
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