Re: [閒聊] 幫忙看一下這句英文有沒有要修改
※ 引述《candywu (無緣的陌生人)》之銘言：
: 因為在等另一間喜歡的公司的offer
: 否則就要去別家公司上班
: 我想主動寫去問問
: 請看看有沒有要修改的地方
: 謝謝
: Dear xxx,
: Alouth I have got an offer from other company,
: I also wait for your decision as I hope that i
: could have an opportunity to work for you. Please
: advise, thanks.
Dear XXX,
I am expecting to work for you even though I have already got an offer
from another company. Hence please tell me if I am elected by you as
soon as possible (or "before (DATE)"), thank you very much!
我覺得這樣寫可能比較通順。
如果還有英文高手可以把話說得更委婉一點，
還請分享，感謝！
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