[妮姬]這次啦啦隊活動劇情(雷)
不想被雷的就左轉吧
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如題 這次啦啦隊活動劇情
已經有人課鑽石直接看完,現在在NGA和巴哈都有人不滿這次劇情
節奏有以下幾點
1.白肉人物個性塑造不討喜
簡而言之就是喜歡貝依,佔有慾強,然後說指揮官無存在感
就綠茶的感覺?
其實要搞百合我覺得也沒啥大問題,不過稱指揮官為教練大人
但又說沒啥存在感,故事上指揮官一開始也是被她們委託找問題
之後大合照又排除指揮官讓他當攝影工具人
2.劇情邏輯有點說不通
訓練到很晚導致遲到,重複多次;白肉動作做不好是因為技術問題?
但是一開始表演卻沒啥大問題,還有1些橋段感覺很硬要
綜合上述原因,讓人認為這次劇情寫手跟聖誕節溫泉劇情是同一位
新仇舊恨一起來累積的問題。
就看後續如果要出白肉 個人劇情有沒有辦法救回來
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