[閒聊] 大家覺得海貓要怎麼改才能讓眾人滿意？消失
海貓引起的爭議不小
若先排除對作者本人的不滿，純以作品而言
海貓應該要怎麼改，才不會像現在這樣呢？
如果
1.拿掉山羊那段
2.講明那晚的真相
刪掉了嘲諷讀者的橋段，又把真相加回去
是不是評價就會好很多呢？
還有其他地方要改嗎？
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※ 編輯: WOODOM (118.38.155.155), 04/21/2015 23:28:38
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