[閒聊] 奧術神座
簡單來說 這本書大致可分為兩部分:
1.結合科普的打臉文 2.魔法世界的冒險
1.較為人詬病的地方在於參考了很多現實的知識
不管是音樂也好化學物理也罷 幾乎原封不動"致敬"
不管本意是想反諷現代科學 還是本身背景 資料比較好找
對於我來說就是毒點
好比在修真小說看到主角居然手拿手術刀在解剖屍體一樣
不僅突兀也失去當初設定世界背景的意義(魔法)
在我看來真正的亮點 魔法世界的架構反而被掩蓋
如果只是想寫近代史 直接穿越到文藝復興不是更好
結合了魔法就好像炒飯加鹽又加糖成四不像
不管你擺盤(文筆)再好我都覺得難吃
不過我倒是看到很多巫師世界的影子
如果能多加著墨於冒險那就是仙草了
只能說可惜
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2.單就魔法世界的設定 不管是死靈界、神的戰爭 預言
都是我覺得不錯的地方 但偏偏作者結合的元素實在是讓我難以下嚥
主線劇情方面圍繞著【創世與宗教】支線以【科普和學院】帶過
整體來看的張力稍嫌薄弱 只有些微的時事梗還有亮點
中間不斷穿插音樂實驗論文 或許有人覺得以科普角度很不錯
但我怎麼都覺得是用來湊字數 很高明的湊字數 不用想劇情 多點形容詞
真要和其他小說比 大概就是詞藻的運用算上優等 比一些正牌作家還好
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