Re: [閒聊] 間客
先拋開老貓的內容不談 單純來看所謂的贅字跟文筆關係
等式1.贅字多=文筆不好
首先 贅字多少的跟文筆的關係
贅字的出現是所謂的無意義描述、無意義用詞或字
抑或是在文句中使用的詞句可以採用更精練更準確的表達
但同上篇及上上篇推文中說道
贅字的多寡是取決於作者後期對文章詞句的檢視
而在作者必須趕稿加更的情形下 根本沒有完成文章後對詞句的挑剔時
貿然下定律 贅字多=文筆不好 似乎是有失偏頗
以金庸來舉例好了
當初 神雕俠侶等書皆為金庸在明報上連載
此時文句用語、亢餘贅字亦不少
後期金庸集結出版之時 方重新校訂
出版後 吾人所見之金庸全著 其中亦參差不少贅字用語
難 g板友亦指金庸此人文筆級差?
觀g板友所述 『文有贅字亢多之人 君不認可文筆為佳』
以此觀點所述 君亦不認可一代大家金庸為文筆上佳之人
(嗯 打到這邊我也很靠杯我為啥用句越來越文言.......)
若以此述 在下不知g閣下心中文筆極佳者為何大能
望g板友尋一人為例 其文可極盡雕琢並『無贅字』者
能符g板友所述條件 使吾人一觀之 以解以管窺天 井底之蛙之惑
(我真的很靠杯自己 我不知道為啥會打字打的越來越文言文啦)
ps懶人包:金庸都有贅字了 你說贅字=文筆不好 那你找個沒贅字的來阿
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