請教一段譯文
是英翻中
原文如下:
During the summer vacation following the beginning of my
teaching career in 1974, I begin to...
本人試譯的結果是這樣的
一九七四年，教學生涯的第一個暑假，我開始...
之前拿給老師看時他說有誤
但是現在要改正時我卻無法發現到底錯誤在哪
請板上高手為我解惑
謝謝!
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