Re: [少年] 失去最初的感動---談完結的鋼鍊
鋼鍊我覺得整部劇情和人物都安排非常好了
卻因為太完整,讓大部分忠實讀者都能預測到接下來的劇情
所以失去了那種驚喜感;編排太過完整的故事總會遇到這類瓶頸
鋼鍊後半段其實也不是純粹的少年漫畫
我覺得是偏重於[贖罪]
而且中期以後,大家目的幾乎都一致,就是解放這一連串的詛咒
最後古利德自我奉獻那邊還挺出乎我意料之外
他跟麟合體後,我還挺喜歡這角色的說
最後鋼仔如何帶回阿爾和那一段,讓我有種釋懷的感覺
原來所謂正確答案就是那樣啊,真的沒想到
真要吐的話
就是吐鋼仔的告白吧,看過許多少年少女漫
第一次看到這麼搞笑的告白台詞.........
話說阿爾你也不簡單啊
說著要去清國學習練丹術
其實是想去找某帶著貓熊的王女吧~~
大佐和中尉那一對大概就這樣了
後面還有詭異的地方
霍恩海姆明明還有力量
最後怎麼會(消音)呢
我個人是覺得最後面收尾反而有點草率
有些地方牛媽沒有好好陳述啊~~
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