[有雷] 近來的故事敘述(微吐槽)
看板ONE_PIECE作者ghghfftjack (我不會水球 別丟我)時間14年前 (2009/11/06 10:34)推噓67(68推 1噓 49→)留言118則, 77人參與討論串1/7 (看更多)
防雷
看了這麼久一陣子 從九蛇島到推進城到現在
我覺得故事的進展太過緊湊了(但我認為這也是難以避免的)
尾田在很多地方的敘述上感覺比較草率
故事的連貫性夠 邏輯上大至也沒什麼問題
但是我看到這一話的刺殺白鬍子 我實在覺得沒什麼感覺
其實之前對宅鬍子 抱歉 是白鬍子的敘述一直都太少了
所以我有尾田在最近拼命的介紹白鬍子的性格的感覺
(這是否代表 白鬍子會掛掉呢? 現在不講清楚以後就沒機會講了??)
史庫亞多(他哪位阿 新世界的船長 然後...對這個人完全不了解)
故事的連貫性 邏輯湊得起來沒錯 但是覺得少了些什麼
之前的海賊團之所以好看 我是認為因為角色的個性非常鮮明
到羅賓為止我都認為很OK 布魯克則是稍嫌不足 但是也過得去
(而且以後還會有機會嘛)
但是現在就只是在畫一場戰鬥 因為太過緊湊的關係
讓人感覺好像少了很多更覺得深刻的東西
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→ rich780501:3Q^^ 10/25 20:17
推 kusoto:好像全世界都在看棒球一樣...你也附個影片嘛? 10/25 20:33
噓 jks99:中職不是爛很久了?還有人要看喔? 10/25 20:35
推 DELETE001:樓上腦袋爛很久了 還不是一直在用 10/25 20:53
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