Re: [老黃] 黃易老大有新的武俠作品問世
看完卷一有些失望
主角強度就像邊荒一樣，一開始就A級高手了
雖然散功，但
睡一覺，速度、五感靈敏度就大為提升，還有失敗的麵的第六感，整個imba
死一次，內力就回來了，可以用杯子接箭，速度更快
瞪一眼，內力爆漲，砍了一個A級高手的頭，表示他至少快S級了
相比覆雨裡的韓柏，一開始還會被高手打的東倒西歪，死裡逃生
現在光第一冊龍鷹開外掛就開太大
造成整個故事毫無緊張感，跟在看邊荒時的感覺差不多
除非本身就愛看YY小說，否則難引起讀者共鳴
除了用字遣辭有比較進步外（雖然還是常常震來震去）
大概也只能當小品看
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