Re: [自抒] 碧血劍
我個人感覺碧血劍一書裡,反派玉真子的描寫算一項不小的問題,既然早已決定最後以玉
真子跟袁承志的決戰為全書結尾的高潮跟終結,但全書通篇寫來,對玉真子的敘述跟設定
卻頗為淺薄。
雖受限篇幅沒法再詳談敘述玉真子由善入惡的具體過程,但像他所使用的武功,就是可以
增加描寫的部分,甚至可以跟前後時代其他書裡的武功結合,他厭惡穆人清的理由也可以
細加敘述才是。
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