[討教] 靖蓉的感情鋪陳是否過於草率?
現在追新射鵰的同時,重新回顧靖蓉的感情之路,覺得實在是進展神速
複習一下郭靖初遇黃蓉之時:
Day1 下午 和六怪分離後來到張家口--初遇乞丐裝扮的黃蓉 請吃大餐、贈送貂衣、寶馬
晚上 和黃蓉分離後投宿客棧,黃河四鬼前來下戰帖
Day2 早上 前往赴約(四鬼被黃蓉戲耍吊在樹上)--中午趕路到了北京
下午 比武招親--和王處一到王府作客--回市鎮幫忙買解藥--黃蓉邀他到湖邊
黃蓉說解藥一定都是被王府搜刮走了,她認為直接到王府取藥是最好的辦法
接著原文如下:
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郭靖道:「總而言之,你不能去。」 卻說不出個道理來。黃蓉低聲道:「你再體惜我,
我可要受不了啦。要是你遇上了危難,難道我獨個兒能活著嗎?」
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嚴格來說,靖蓉二人才認識一天的時間,就已經有生死相依的感情了?
如果是先一見鍾情,兩人共度生死關頭後而萌發出的情感,這還說得過去
但是從靖蓉相遇開始,兩人不過是一同吃了頓飯
第二天再遇到就不知不覺愛的如此強烈
完全不懂這段感情是怎麼升溫的
這段感情的鋪陳是否有點草率呢?
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