Re: [問題] 寫作無法突破....
※ 引述《tillafinz (finZ)》之銘言：
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: When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life
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: die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
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: To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion?
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: With technology extensively progressing, cities have developed in such short
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: period nowadays and have led to massive changes to people’s daily life. Some
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: argues in a pessimistic tone that many old virtues which inherited from
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: ancestors are forgotten and replaced by the more convenient and modern way. I
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: do not agree with this statement. It is true that in the process of pursuing
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: new technology, some old skills we used disappeared due to they are not
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: suitable in the modern world any longer. However, what new technology brings to
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: the society is not only the destruction to the originals but also maintenance
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: of the spirit of traditions.
於"However"之後，應該要簡單清楚地表達出整篇文章的立場。
題目問T1「贊成還是反對保留傳統文化？」，你卻沒有清楚表達出立場。
第一,你離題了。
整篇的回答方式比較像在回答T2「是否認為科技有助於保留傳統文化？」，
而非回答題目T1。
第二，就算回答的是T2，
你的寫法為not only [缺點]，but also [優點]，並沒有說你到底贊成還是反對，
反而以為你採取中間立場。
可是，看整篇文章看下來，第二和第三段各提優點，所以你的立場應該要寫[贊成]為主,
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