Re: 其實萬界本來該是這樣的...
: 推 aa1052026: 呢...若當初是看到這個，我大概不會收這套 03/14 16:51
能說說缺點在什麼地方?
是什麼地方讓你看了就不想看下去嗎？
戰器快要結束了，希望能從你的建議裡，
檢討這個開頭的得失
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