[請益] email句子文法有誤，請幫忙訂正

看板Eng-Class作者 (u04y7t)時間9年前 (2016/03/29 23:32), 9年前編輯推噓8(8推 0噓 5→)
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同事的email句子我覺得文法有誤，該怎樣寫才正確。 1. in order to our follow up accordingly 2. in order to our revert to client here 3. wait your clarify and reply 前兩句 1.Could you please add A company to list in order to our follow up accordingly. 2.Could you please assit to check and reply in order to our revert client here. 中文想表達"請你幫忙~~以便我們~~" 因為我查字典in order to+動詞，in order for+名詞，這兩句兩個都想加，要怎麼寫才對? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 180.217.7.236 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1459265564.A.1D0.html
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03/29 23:44, , 1F
我看不懂耶 XD
03/29 23:44, 1F
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03/29 23:47, , 2F
3 是要說 I'm waiting for your clarification嗎?
03/29 23:47, 2F
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03/29 23:47, , 3F
1 2 我投降
03/29 23:47, 3F
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03/30 00:01, , 4F
一看就知道系統廠
03/30 00:01, 4F
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03/30 00:17, , 5F
in order to要接動詞
03/30 00:17, 5F
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03/30 00:38, , 6F
?????
03/30 00:38, 6F
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03/30 00:40, , 7F
別這麼說，我在系統廠十幾年也看不懂
03/30 00:40, 7F
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03/30 07:48, , 8F
先把中文打上來
03/30 07:48, 8F
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03/30 09:17, , 9F
完全看不懂。有整句的話可能還可以猜ㄧ下
03/30 09:17, 9F
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03/30 09:18, , 10F
XD，第三句可改成await your clarifying and reply，但re
03/30 09:18, 10F
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03/30 09:18, , 11F
ply多餘。前兩句看不懂。
03/30 09:18, 11F
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03/30 09:18, , 12F
所有格後面動詞要用動名詞。
03/30 09:18, 12F
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03/30 09:41, , 13F
所有格後面接動名詞，但和 in order to 不搭XD
03/30 09:41, 13F
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