Re: [求譯] 幫我看一下我有沒有錯誤.
我文法也沒很好
在這邊念研究所還被叫去上文法課(遮臉
但還是先幫你修一些小問題
有修錯的地方，再請高手也指正我一下囉 感謝:)
※ 引述《rolems (rolems)》之銘言：
: I deeply appreciated JJJ and ZZZ, giving me the opportunity to visit Japan
: for one month. Also special thanks to Kyoto University Professor xxxx, yyy
: and zzz students. With their help, I can complete the studies and living in
^^^^^
could stayed
: Japan for one months.
^^^
: In fact, I like Japan very much and been to Tokyo, but only for three days.
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I had been to Japan for three days, and I love there so much.
: But in this journey, I am even more profound experience about the
: feeling of living in Japan.
In this journey, I got profound experiences about the life of Japan.
: I think the students in Japan study very
: carefully, they are very kindly and friendly to the foreigners. Japanese are
(and)
: very law-abiding. I have rarely seen the trash on the ground and people will
The streets in Japan are very clean, and people obey the
rule.
: not jaywalk. In addition, I think they are very creative, especially in the
especially in designing the appearance
of products.
: appearance of the goods. It is always able to attract consumers want to buy.
The product they designed can always attract consumers.
: Their industry is very diverse, not only the field of electronics industry,
: the development in the fields of automotive, music, finance, tourism,
: machinery is also very hot. They have national identity and cherish their own
: culture, this can be a profound experience visit the temples of Kyoto. I
: think Taiwan should learn a lot to from Japan.
There are multiple outstanding industries in Japan. Not only electronics
industry, the automotive, music, finance, tourism, and machinesry are also very
blooming too.
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: 非常感謝jjj與zzz的補助，讓我有機會能夠體會一個月的日本生活。也特別感謝京都大學
: 的xxx教授，yyy以及zzz同學的幫忙，才讓我能夠順利的在日本生活一個月以及完成這個
: 研究。
: 其實我很喜歡日本，之前有去過一次東京，不過只待了三天。但在這次的旅途中， 我更
: 加深刻的體會到融入日本生活的感覺。我覺得日本人的研究非常仔細， 對人處事，對待
: 外國人都非常的親切與熱情。他們也很守法，守規矩。在日本我很少看到有行人會任意穿
: 越馬路，路上也很少看到地上有垃圾。此外，我覺得他們非常的有創意，尤其是在商品的
: 外表上，總是能夠吸引消費者想去購買。他們的產業也非常多元，不只是電子產業領域，
: 他們在汽車、音樂、金融、觀光、機械領域的發展也是非常熱絡的。不像台灣只有電子產
: 業領域。我認為這點台灣政府應該要多多向日本學習。他們非常的有國家認同感，幾乎只
: 用國產。他們很珍惜自己的文化，這點在參訪京都的寺廟中就可以深刻體會到了。許多地
: 方，台灣應該要跟日本好好學習。
: ==========
: 請問我這樣寫有哪個地方有錯誤嗎?
: 我覺得我已經盡力了...orz
: 懇請高手幫忙..(跪拜)
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