[求譯] 幫我看一下我有沒有錯誤.
I deeply appreciated JJJ and ZZZ, giving me the opportunity to visit Japan
for one month. Also special thanks to Kyoto University Professor xxxx, yyy
and zzz students. With their help, I can complete the studies and living in
Japan for one months.
In fact, I like Japan very much and been to Tokyo, but only for three days.
But in this journey, I am even more profound experience to integrate into the
feeling of living in Japan. I think the students in Japan study very
carefully, they are very kindly and friendly to the foreigners. Japanese are
very law-abiding. I have rarely seen the trash on the ground and people will
not jaywalk. In addition, I think they are very creative, especially in the
appearance of the goods. It is always able to attract consumers want to buy.
Their industry is very diverse, not only the field of electronics industry,
the development in the fields of automotive, music, finance, tourism,
machinery is also very hot. They have national identity and cherish their own
culture, this can be a profound experience visit the temples of Kyoto. I
think Taiwan should learn a lot to from Japan.
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非常感謝jjj與zzz的補助，讓我有機會能夠體會一個月的日本生活。也特別感謝京都大學
的xxx教授，yyy以及zzz同學的幫忙，才讓我能夠順利的在日本生活一個月以及完成這個
研究。
其實我很喜歡日本，之前有去過一次東京，不過只待了三天。但在這次的旅途中， 我更
加深刻的體會到融入日本生活的感覺。我覺得日本人的研究非常仔細， 對人處事，對待
外國人都非常的親切與熱情。他們也很守法，守規矩。在日本我很少看到有行人會任意穿
越馬路，路上也很少看到地上有垃圾。此外，我覺得他們非常的有創意，尤其是在商品的
外表上，總是能夠吸引消費者想去購買。他們的產業也非常多元，不只是電子產業領域，
他們在汽車、音樂、金融、觀光、機械領域的發展也是非常熱絡的。不像台灣只有電子產
業領域。我認為這點台灣政府應該要多多向日本學習。他們非常的有國家認同感，幾乎只
用國產。他們很珍惜自己的文化，這點在參訪京都的寺廟中就可以深刻體會到了。許多地
方，台灣應該要跟日本好好學習。
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請問我這樣寫有哪個地方有錯誤嗎?
我覺得我已經盡力了...orz
懇請高手幫忙..(跪拜)
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