Re: [請益] 我寫了英文感謝函給雇主請幫我看一下갠…

看板Eng-Class作者hoch (Sanctuary)時間15年前 (2010/08/01 16:07)推噓1(1推 0噓 6→)

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Dear Manager Obama : Nice to have this great chance to see you again on Friday, : I think it is still : in exciting mood to work with you in the following days. - on Friday 後面用句點 - It was nice to meet you again last Friday. I enjoy our conversation very much. - I am really excited about having the opportunity to work with you in ABC Corp. : I look for a good copmany located in sourther Taiwan even close my house , : it is also my dream if I want to live my country and work around here - 不明白這句用現在式是有特殊意義？老實說，沒有上下文，不是很懂你要講什麼。 - Initially I was looking for jobs in southern part of Taiwan, which is closer to my home town. Comparing with working overseas, I also prefer staying in Taiwan. : A little suprise for me there is a such international company found here : for 20 years history and hide behind police station , - Again, 這句話用義在哪裡？ - I found that, while being a multi-national corporation, ABC Corp. has established its office in Taiwan for 20 years. To my surprise, its office is located in a low-profile district behind a police station. : Thank you for your positive approval, - 句子結束請用句點。 - 另外你想說的是 "正面肯定"？ - Your kind offer is really appreciated. To me it is an important recognition of my skills and experiences. : I will pay my efforts and keep in good condition to learn from you to : understand xxx business field. - "pay my effort"？看不太懂。 - Although my background is not directly related to the field, I'll try my best to settle myself upon reporting to ABC Corp. : I will discuss with my current company to make everything clear for my : present position and confirm what time I will be on board , : I will inform and have a discussion with you by next week. : Thanks again for your approval . - I will let you know the exact date that I can report to ABC Corp once I submit my resignation to my current company next week. Thank you again for giving me the opportunity. Best regards, --

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