[討論] 火鳳是不是該轉型了?
最近迷上了王者天下這部漫畫
和火鳳同樣都是三實七虛的歷史同人誌
兩部作品都有一定的知名度
但火鳳給我的感覺就是略遜一籌
城下一聚、連環計、孫策下江東都是很精彩的計謀
感情戲也寫得不錯,有些橋段真的讓我感動到起雞皮疙瘩
但看久後我卻覺得越來越奇怪,哪裡怪我也說不上來
直到我開始看王者天下後才發現...
為什麼火鳳只寫戰略不寫戰術?
賈詡的暗行陣法是什麼?
為什麼弓箭齊射就讓戰神全軍覆沒了?
袁方的八陣圖怎麼佈的?
為什麼軍隊轉個幾圈就可以以寡擊眾?
呂布打袁術的部分就更精簡了
單騎衝撞直接讓數萬大軍潰散,很不科學
戰術的部分完全省略,好像軍師定個戰略就保證100%達成目的
相較之下王者天下在戰術上的表現就比較好
蒙武的波狀衝撞、蒙驁的陷阱迷宮、輪虎的輪動
還有李牧的流水陣 (類似八陣圖的東西)
簡單的俯視圖就可以讓讀者了解陣法原理
地形優勢、分散兵力的戰術也有詳細解釋
看一兩話就可以明白整個戰役的全貌
淺顯易懂毫不拖泥帶水
反觀火鳳
我可能翻了一兩集還不知道一個計中計的目的是什麼
像是那個連環計
我要等好幾個月才知道龐統的戰略目標是削弱各方勢力、壯大劉寵
而這幾個月的劇情完全沒有戰術上的描寫
我只知道小軍閥莫名其妙就打贏曹軍了、然後莫名其妙就輸給曹軍了
並不是說火鳳的這種創作方式劣於王者,只是覺得很納悶...
既然都有本事構思一個複雜的戰略,為何不再花點時間想一個簡單的戰術
讓整個戰略的過程更加精采
而且戰略這種東西實在很難讓人產生共鳴
像是那個剛歸西的郭嘉,戰略眼光高出眾人一大截
不要說烏丸了,連曹操在華蓉道吃土、臥龍第三次出山都被他算到了
但恐怕沒人知道郭嘉厲害在哪裡
大概只會挖挖鼻孔說:喔,三國演義哪裡買的?
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※ 編輯: finaloltry 來自: 49.159.151.6 (05/19 01:15)
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