[17夏] 重啟咲良田 1,2 一頭霧水啊...已回收
聽說是本季霸權 來補個 結果看得一頭霧水...
首先 這部有獨特的設定
咲良田的居民擁有各式各樣能夠突破物理法則的能力
能力與能力之間的關係也需要釐清
像中間有一段用自殘威脅管理局職員的橋段
惠只說了我確認過傳聲能力在"重啟"後仍然有效 就這樣帶過了
咦? 所以是怎樣? "重啟"後職員沒說過這句話依然可以傳到?
再來是情感鋪陳的部分吧
覺得有點太趕了
像是惠在說服媽媽接受女兒的時候 可以花點篇幅描寫過去媽媽的心情
這樣女兒在說"喜歡媽媽"才更有破壞力 不是嗎?
還有就是主角的價值觀
惠和菫在對話時 總是需要讓人思考再三
光從表面來看不是那麼好理解
最後 菫死掉是三小啦??? 不是才兩集而已嗎?
我是不是有漏看什麼?
"重啟"後 世界線也有機會變異嗎?
總而言之 資訊量太大啦! 豆頁痛!
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真的 看來這部比較適合每週追 有一個禮拜的時間可以細細推敲
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"重啟"有一天的CD時間 而且只能一次
用來試效果的話 不怕卡到真正要用的時間嗎?
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路人是沒關係啦 只是一開始還在適應的時候
覺得花些篇幅把節奏緩下來會比較好
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這樣倒是放心不少
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讓我想到之前看絕園的暴風雨時 也看愛花說一堆謎言XD
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原來如此 這個能力讓"重啟"多了很多不穩定因素啊
原本以為只有惠的能力是特別的 對應班長所說:"你們在一起具有巨大的意義"
如此變因就限縮在惠的行動之中
但若有其他能力也能影響 事情就不是這麼簡單了
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