[閒聊] 煙雨江南的文筆...
最近書荒,隨便找了煙雨江南的永夜君主啃了下。之前稍微有看過這個作者的狩魔跟罪惡
之城,但不知道是什麼原因都沒看完。這次才翻了幾頁,就差點毒發棄坑。原因是下面這
句話:
張靜往上推了推眼鏡,鼓脹的胸部隨著這個微小動作而劇烈起伏著。
是說沒吃過豬肉,也看過豬走路。這位作者是兩性關係不行,實在想像不出一個輕微的推
眼睛的動作,要怎麼讓胸部劇烈起伏?難道這張靜像健美男子一樣會自己動胸肌?
想問一下版友這部值得看下去嗎?還是有什麼糧草可以推薦一下。感謝。
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