[討論] 用合理有邏輯的手法來描寫俠義
一六一六年(元和二年)陰曆二月,當時很有名望的富農花山家遭到山賊血洗,
幸好那一晚借住花山家的賭徒挺身而出,才保住彌吉這個花山家殘存的孤兒。
這名賭徒將彌吉用寺廟的鐘蓋住,並以身軀為盾牌死守,據說他到死都是站立著。
花山家從那之後,一直把這位賭徒尊崇為俠客,現在他仍被當成神像接受膜拜著。
只借住一宿的流浪漢,以死來報答這一夜的恩情,永遠被銘刻在內心。
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我個人到目前為止所看過的所有俠義情節都類似上面那樣,
第一眼看時感到莫名的熱血沸騰, 但事後分析又感覺奇怪:
"只因一宿之恩就出生入死...好像不合邏輯吶..."
請問是否有好的方法來描寫這類俠義情節,
讓人初看熱血, 事後分析也能合理有邏輯.
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