[轉錄][創作] Pain

看板poetry作者 (CJ)時間13年前 (2011/04/13 19:26), 編輯推噓2(201)
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※ [本文轉錄自 spacedunce5 信箱] 作者: spacedunce5.bbs@ptt2.cc (spacedunce5.bbs@ptt2.cc) 標題: [創作] Pain 時間: Wed Apr 13 19:25:05 2011 作者: dieEule (邦邦) 看板: summerlife 標題: [創作] Pain 時間: Wed Apr 13 01:20:24 2011 1. Guilt rankles you before sleep And pain is that which tugs When you're awake. Every line of dialogue, A chipping of the dry-caked heart, A pestling of the earth To spout fountains of green frond blood. 2. The face wanders, Lost by the sea. The words of a former lover Are gusts of ill-tempered wind Spit onto the calloused skin. The draft chills, But the sand core is warm, The touch hauntingly serrate. 3. I think of you as dead, Safely encased in a cell-like grave. Your tombstone a heavy door For wreaths to adorn, But no keyhole to manipulate. In truth, you are still alive. Acquitted and resurrected In the sunlight, You bear the same murderous face, A face that killed itself And reincarnated To question my stranger gaze. 4. Memories of our past life together - You left them Folded neatly into a bundle, Hanging on a slender bough Of a tree By the riverside of Lethe. And now you've forgotten which tree. 5. To answer your question of love: Yes, I did, Or no, I never would. The past will eventually be Peeled off like a husk For the present to be solemnly reaped, The future, somewhat edible. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢兔(ptt2.cc) ◆ From: 140.112.228.36 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 122.124.102.252

04/13 19:26, , 1F
just love that 4th stanza to DEATH!
04/13 19:26, 1F

04/13 20:02, , 2F
推邦邦小天才妹妹 XD 我很喜歡她寫的詩
04/13 20:02, 2F

04/14 06:21, , 3F
very pretty
04/14 06:21, 3F
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