[分享]請批~鋼琴彈唱創作~謝謝各位先進~

看板piano作者 (吉他阿帕)時間16年前 (2008/04/03 19:45), 編輯推噓12(12推 0噓 15→)
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自創曲 Oh My Love http://youtube.com/watch?v=bmFgGiQQHEk OH MY LOVE Rhyshm Rubato Music&Lyrics by 林鼎堯 #D Cm #G #A Oh my love, where are you? #D Cm Fm #A Oh my love, I want to kiss you. Oh my love, hold me tie. Oh my love, please don't say goodbye.~~~Coda~~ I am just a foolish man crazy about you. I am just a stupid one dream of you I am just a poor guy can't buy your shoes. I am just wonder why do you love me too? Fm #A #D Cm near me near me near me, please hear me hear me hear me, sing~~ hold me hold me hold me, in the night love me love me love me, how you doing~~ #G #A Gm Cm mom say you can't hurry the love friend tell me that it's come so easy but I really miss you~~~~ Interlude Solo~~ Blue Swing solo~ Chorus~1 Cm Fm #A #D Girl, your fantasy like the wonderland #G Dm Gm make me be your wing, fly through mountain top Cm Fm #A #D I like the way you are, raindrop flow through the three #G Dm Gm Mom whisper to the child, the twilight have come Solo~1 Beethoven Pathetique~3~(repeat from top) Chorus~2 Cm Fm #A #D Flower cry to the sky, she lost all her star, #G Dm Gm but remember the spark in my heart~~ Cm Fm #A #D Sun say to the moon, he can't wait till night #G Dm Gm but remember she reflect his shine~~ Solo~2 Quasi Beethoven Sonata moonlight Arpeggio~1 Free Piano Blue Speed Solo~ ~2 ~~reapeat from top to coda -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 163.22.18.78
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04/03 19:57, , 1F
你成功了，我從第一次聽到現在沒忘記這首歌的旋律
04/03 19:57, 1F
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04/03 20:03, , 2F
歌詞是自己寫的嗎？好像有些地方文法有點問題 @@"
04/03 20:03, 2F
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04/03 20:58, , 3F
看得出你對音樂的熱情
04/03 20:58, 3F
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04/03 23:38, , 4F
哈哈...看到原Po就會想起李斯特的鐘 XD
04/03 23:38, 4F
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04/03 23:57, , 5F
英文怪怪的XD
04/03 23:57, 5F
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04/04 00:45, , 6F
總覺得「near me」的near這個字應該要是動詞 @@"
04/04 00:45, 6F
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04/04 00:46, , 7F
一點小意見，請別見怪
04/04 00:46, 7F
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04/04 00:49, , 8F
near的確是動詞，那請無視我的推文吧 = =||
04/04 00:49, 8F
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04/04 00:59, , 9F
請大家用力批　這樣對我才是有幫助的　謝謝各位前輩Ｏｒｚ
04/04 00:59, 9F
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04/04 01:05, , 10F
你很有勇氣耶!!! 能這樣坦蕩地接受大家的意見 ~
04/04 01:05, 10F
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04/04 01:42, , 11F
我們都需要勇氣 我相信這樣才能進步 我ㄧ定會改進的~
04/04 01:42, 11F
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04/04 03:42, , 12F
鋼琴我不是很行 但是歌聲的部分太弱了 去Vocal版多學
04/04 03:42, 12F
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04/04 03:43, , 13F
著點 至少嗓子要開 氣要吸夠（但不一定要大聲）
04/04 03:43, 13F
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04/04 03:52, , 14F
自彈自唱不容易 但是歌聲比琴重要些畢竟那是旋律的表
04/04 03:52, 14F
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04/04 03:52, , 15F
達 所以如果沒把握 寧可簡單伴奏 不要唱得像伴奏...
04/04 03:52, 15F
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04/04 06:58, , 16F
想起李斯特的鐘+1
04/04 06:58, 16F
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04/04 11:15, , 17F
好~我會仔細參考您的意見的~
04/04 11:15, 17F
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04/04 20:31, , 18F
I am just a poor guy can't buy your shoes..?英文怪怪的
04/04 20:31, 18F
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04/04 20:33, , 19F
raindrop flow through the three..?
04/04 20:33, 19F
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04/04 20:35, , 20F
很好笑
04/04 20:35, 20F
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04/04 20:35, , 21F
我是不懂英文啦,意思是我很窮不能買鞋子給你? 下面是tree?
04/04 20:35, 21F
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04/04 20:38, , 22F
你的枯葉彈的真的很棒XDDDDDD
04/04 20:38, 22F
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04/04 20:38, , 23F
看起來好像 我只是個窮人不能買你的鞋子
04/04 20:38, 23F
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04/05 11:20, , 24F
應該是buy "you" 啦
04/05 11:20, 24F
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04/05 13:04, , 25F
NCNU的 推一下
04/05 13:04, 25F
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04/05 15:16, , 26F
我覺得唱的部分請別人唱比較好..不然聽的有一點痛苦...
04/05 15:16, 26F
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04/05 20:00, , 27F
我也這樣想過 有機會 我會找女生來幫我唱~~
04/05 20:00, 27F
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