[有感] 第一次寫出感人的英文作文(自我感覺良好)

看板ck61st324作者時間14年前 (2010/05/12 00:06), 編輯推噓6(606)
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有關老建 題目A PLACE A PLACE When I was a Chien Kuo senior high student , I lived away from home to Taipei. Sometimes, it's a little lonely for me living alone. Only one of my classmates was in the same situation. We had to eat outside, wash our own clothes and find something to do on the weekend. Eating out is the main problem, but there is a great place for students-Old Chien Kuo Sichuan Corner Shop. Unlike other county, the price in Taipei was much higher. Having a meal often cost more than one hundred dollars. It's too much for a student. Therefore, finding the restaurants which provided big and cheap food was the major concern for me. Old Chien Kuo Sichuan Corner Shop is that kind of type. Located near my school, I went there four times a week. If not going home, even six times! First entering the shop in tenth grade, I saw there were lots of students chatting, laughing and eating. The owner's wife were concentrating on cooking noodles and the owner slicing the seaweeds and marinated eggs. I ordered a bowl of dry noodles and waited for almost thirty minutes to get mine(very popular shop:)). I felt kind of impatient. However, having the first bite in my mouth, I realized it was worth waiting. It not only cost just 45 dollars for the big one but tasted delicious! Since then, I had been there more and more often. The owner's wife found it and chatted with me. I told her about my studying background and she said she had seen so many students coming from other places to study in our school. After that, I always got a free egg soup in the shop. She knew studying from home is harder for me, so I always got free soup because of her kindness. During the winter she told me to wear more clothes every time I entered the shop. Soon, two years passed. I had to prepare for the College Entrance Exam. She encouraged me to overcome the challenge. While having applied for NTU, I saw the all smiles from the couples. Sharing the happiness with them really made me so joyous. I really appreciate the time in the shop. To me, Old Chien Kuo Sichuan Corner Shop is my place in Taipei during that three years. Now I still usually come back to order my favorite noodles and talk with the couples. Sometimes I bring some Portuguese egg tarts which are popular near NTU. I'm so happy to hear the owner's wife praise the egg tart's relish. That's the sweetest thing in my life! -- 好人 小護身符 -80%的機會從怪物身上獲得更多的金錢 -40%的機會獲得更佳魔法裝備 -50%~80%對正妹的抗性 -30所有的屬性轉換 +2~6電腦維修(變動) +3~5提款機(變動) +1~4司機(變動) 攻擊時有100%的機會施展等級20的正妹狗 被攻擊時有200%的機會施展等級15的好人的怒吼 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.112.218.113

05/12 00:07, , 1F
其實是要衝100篇在NBA板發文
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05/12 00:14, , 2F
文法有錯喔= =
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05/12 00:16, , 3F
V-ing當主詞當作單數 然後你有些分詞構句 主詞不對
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05/12 00:17, , 4F
還有 the 有些放得怪怪的
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05/12 00:32, , 5F
我現在才要開始寫...哭哭
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05/12 00:32, , 6F
三分鐘前才到家 今天搭到板南線末班車耶
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05/12 00:36, , 7F
許家源...
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05/12 00:40, , 8F
你可以寫你家廁所 地圖 還有洨汁 A Place!
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05/12 00:41, , 9F
有請莊騷 (拜)
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05/12 01:24, , 10F
現在拜他也太晚了吧 在9個小時就要交了
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05/12 01:57, , 11F
寫完了..
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05/12 07:55, , 12F
我剛起床= = 被cue了嗎XD
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