Re: 英文自傳求批

看板Salary作者anr2 (???)時間4年前 (2019/07/08 17:39)推噓-3(3推 6噓 41→)

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小弟英文沒有很好, 但是覺的應該與人為善稍微的幫忙修改一下履歷歡迎給予指教謝謝 I am a junior student XXXX, majoring in social marketing, in the Department of Marketing and Tourism Management of Chiayi University. I want to apply for a long-term internship program for your company, YYYYY, and my available working days can start on 15th July 2019. For shortly introducing myself and saving your reviewing time, Here is a list of my skills and work experiences as following. Master Skills: 1. MS Office PowerPoint 2. MS Office Word 3. MS Office Excel including VBA Scripting Language Certificates: GEPT, Taiwan 725 scores Prize awarded: 2018 The champion of National Universities of Green Tourism Creative Travel Planning Competition, TAIWAN. The design concept had received many positive praise from syndic. Venture experiences: 1. Student Dormitory Volunteer from 2017/07 - 2018/06; this position often need to accommodate the quarrel between the dormmates, I solve many conflicts and always found the best compromise among them. 2. Coordinator of the cherished community from 2018/9 - 2019/3; I lead community member and propose many plans for execution such as XXX festival event. 3. Teaching Assistant at Kid Castle from XXXX/XX - XXXX/XX; this is accounting work; it needs to use the excel to make income and outcome sheets to ensure all expenditures are correct. Through this position, I learned many experiences from the fixed a lot of general chaos in bookkeeping to help the billing system to complete. 4.Social Network Relationship Podcast from XXXX/XX - XXXX/XX; I am a copywriter in charge of advertising proposal including the product introduction, adjusting the photo of the product, and publishing it into the social networks like Instagram, Facebook, and Youtube. 5. Foxconn 2005 high school student internship program. My primary work is to execute the promotion plan of Asia Pacific Telecom to provide the customer with lower telecom charges and help them to understand the benefit compared to another Telecom company. Finally, I kindly asked the honor reviewer to give me a chance to apply for this long-term internship, and I will show my best performance to reach your expectations. ※ 引述《sz06060817 (rose)》之銘言： : My name is , I am studying in the third year of Chiayi University - Department : of Marketing and Tourism Management. I am a marketer who is very interested i : n social marketing. : Working days: Summer vacations can be practiced every day. After semester begi : ns, the internship days are Monday, Tuesday, and Thursday. I can cooperate wit : h a long-term internship. : Study experience: I often need to make a ppt about the course, so I am familia : r with using office and ppt. : Activity experience: : Chiayi University Xinmin student dormitory Volunteer (201707-201806) - I often : n : eed to solve all kinds of things in the accommodation, so I cultivate the abil : ity to respond to the crisis. : Coordinator of the cherished community (201809-201903): I am responsible for t : he : planning and execution of the event. : Teaching Assistant of Kid Castle: Because the work requires excel to record th : e income and expenditure, I learned to use it and the ability to solve unexpec : ted situations. : Acting as a public relations officer: experience in writing and writing a copy : . I have an idea on planning a copy. : I often write about urcosme's product experience. I will publish a product in : ig and get 154 people by love. My ig is . : Foxconn 94 students internship program. : Help promote Asia Pacific Telecom and computers. : Winning experience: : The 2018 national colleges and universities green tourism creative travel plan : ning competition is preferred. The design concept attracts consumers' journeys : . : License Expertise: The score is 725 points. I use tutoring and listening to En : glish broadcasts to increase my English ability. : I hope that your company will give me this opportunity, I will cherish this in : ternship. I will not disappoint your company's expectations. : 可以請大家幫我看看，並給予我建議嗎？謝謝 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 220.132.247.227 (臺灣) ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Salary/M.1562578740.A.5BC.html

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anper

07/08 18:05, 4年前 , 1^F

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anper

07/08 18:05, 4年前 , 2^F

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vosser

07/08 18:06, 4年前 , 3^F

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所以我想邀請您告訴我有什麼格式？小弟英文真的不太好 cakeresume.com 才是對的？呵呵語言是用來溝通的不是拿來當武器高來高去的 be nice 我想您不會有什麼損失吧

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PANG920

07/08 18:08, 4年前 , 4^F

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PANG920

07/08 18:09, 4年前 , 5^F

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有點怪就歡迎指正這裡又不是科技板又不是軟工板不必高來高去想改就一起改背～我本人是不了解 marketing 產業, 剛剛只是看到一個新人被轟的很慘, 然後要給實質建議又不肯給. 所以我跳出來改一篇改完的履歷其實是不能當原po的履歷, 但總是可以一個當範例一個過程難道要每個人都是英文高手才準寫英文？不管是履歷還是論文, 文章的本質是溝通對吧? ※ 編輯: anr2 (220.132.247.227 臺灣), 07/08/2019 18:19:52

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PANG920

07/08 18:12, 4年前 , 6^F

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Thanks, correct it. ※ 編輯: anr2 (220.132.247.227 臺灣), 07/08/2019 18:24:37

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PANG920

07/08 18:22, 4年前 , 7^F

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剛剛編寫程式邊幫它改英文只有一兩個小時當然很難完美囉有大家參與至少弄一篇示範出來 ptt 都快沒有新的後進了別讓 ptt 死在我們手上 (雖然蠻有機會的以後應該是 dcard 或者新的平台稱霸） ※ 編輯: anr2 (220.132.247.227 臺灣), 07/08/2019 18:26:19 ※ 編輯: anr2 (220.132.247.227 臺灣), 07/08/2019 18:28:25

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PANG920

07/08 18:30, 4年前 , 8^F

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※ 編輯: anr2 (220.132.247.227 臺灣), 07/08/2019 18:34:07

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