Re: [寫作班] 托福第34週 ynynegg 1
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First, after writing you need to read again for grammatical problems.
you sometimes use single verb with plural noun, or plural verb with single
noun.
※ 引述《ynyn (為何總是不順利...)》之銘言：
: Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past?
: Why or why not?
: Listening, speaking, reading and writing are the basic skills of
: communication in the society. Nowadays, people always think that these skills
: are not important anymore because of advanced technology. However, in the
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~why?
here needs an explanation.
: over-information period, the skills of reading and writing are more critical
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~what do you mean?
: today than in the past.
: First, In the internet period, there are too much information to make people
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~rare construction
: confuse. If we have not adequate skill of reading, we could not identify
confused. ~~~~~~~~~~~~we don't have ....skills for reading
: whether the information is useful for us or not. For one thing, When I search
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
not adequate here.
: some information for my report in the internet, I always have to throw out
: the meaningless messages and make sure the information is my need. If I lack
~~~~~~~~
meets my need or is what I need
: of the reading skill, I would mess up my report or homework. In addition,
: based on the high level education, many people, such as lawyers, businessmen,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~why based on high education?
if you say so, it means people without high education do not need reading/
writing skills. But it is not true.
: scientists and graduated students, have to read a lot of academic papers or
: professional reports. All they have to do is improving their reading skill
: before they be a successful people. Thus, it’s very important to have the
become
: great reading skill.
there is not need for "the" just "good reading skills"
: Second, in the modern period of overwhelming information, the writing ability
: is necessary, too. We can’t ignore the writing skill because it and reading
: skill are the complement each other. We can not expect that people only have
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~complementary
: one excellent skill to help them be a successful person. Take the same for
~~~~~~~~~~?
: example, after I classify the data, I usually have to restore these data to
: become the information I need. If I scarcity the writing skill, how I can let
how do you "restore" the data to become the information you need?
: others know my expression. Also, every successful people have the outstanding
person has
: writing skill because they have to write numerous reports to their managers,
: customers or publics. Therefore, we have to
?
: In the period of chaotic information, we must have to improve the skills of
~~~~~~~~~why chaotic?
: reading and writing. The importance is not only for students, but also for
: everyone. We have to use these two skills to leach and reestablish the
~~~~filter
: information we need.
another thing: if we refer to skills in general, no need for "the"
"good writing skills" is enough.
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