[寫作班] IELTS task2寫作 Doris
Out of country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from
treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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In recent years governments and ordinary citizens have been attaching greater
weight to the health issue, and furthermore, the argument of should authority
concerned spends more revenue on health education and preventative measures
has become a hot-button debate, however, I believe that prevention is surely
better than cure.
A patient who has limited education of health and medicine would cause huge
catastrophe to himself/herself, for he/she might abuse drugs or take medicine
indiscreetly. Therefore, that is why health education plays such an important
role in medical system, furthermore, health education also concerns to the
avocations of personal hygiene, educating people to build up good hygiene
habits, for example, wash your hands before you eat, could decrease the
possibility of getting ill and lower the country’s health budget.
Spending more budgets on the research of preventative measures could also
decrease the future potential health hazards. Through the experiments of
scientists, new method of curing deadly diseases such as cancers and AIDS
might be invented, and through the research works, not only the medical
staffs, but also ordinary citizens can acquire more useful knowledge toward
those illnesses.
Some argue that transfer a large proportion of budget from treatment to other
preventative measures is actually wasting time and money, for solving the
crises now should be put more importance than preventing the unknown future
crises. However, I do not agree with this opinion, for I believe that both
treatments and preventative measures share the same degree of importance,
government and the authority concerned should not only handle the happening
crises, saving lives in distress, but also put into money and efforts in
finding remedies and new method of curing diseases.
In conclusion, I believe that both prevention and cure are important and
crucial to human society.
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