Re: [寫作班] 托福第14週 mason, 1
※ 引述《mason (牲牲不息)》之銘言：
: : 1. Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy
: : them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and
: : examples to support your opinion.
: I think a city should try to preserve these old, histotic buildings
: rather than destroy them, even should preserve without any repair or
: modification. These old renmants represent a history and culture of a
: place. It can tell local citizens, their child and everyone come to this
They children +who
: town what the special event happended on this city or the developmental
.
: history of this place, which is help to let them understand the culture
: of this town better and impressed.
: For example, old KaoHsiung railway station which is a important spot of
+the which刪掉
: history. KaoHsiung old railway station was been built on 1941, the end
1. spot of history-> historic spot
2. KaoHsiung old railway station-> It
: of japanese goverance era. The age of building is 68 years. This building
: has undergone and witness many important historical event, ex. February 28 Incident,
witnessed
: the 2nd world war, Formosa Boulevard Incident and so on. To preserve this
: important spot, the goverment make a 85 meters shift without any
: destroyed.
: With the views which mentioned above, we can see the point why a
: historic old building should be preserved.
: ... don't know how to make a ending.....
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