[閒聊] 1095回憶篇
許久沒進入回憶故事了
不過現在的回憶跟以往也差太多
之前都滿滿鋪陳腳色,背景等
這次直接跳躍衝進度,
沒幾格就轉場景
這熊爸跟阿熊的眼淚也太廉價
以前尾大說過要畫腳色哭,
本身自己也要能哭出來
這段感覺故事如能好好鋪陳,
應該也能成賺人熱淚的經典橋段,
可惜了……
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