Re: [心得] 791 雷
(雷頁)
明明覺得德雷薩雷斯篇很亂很拖很奇怪
但居魯士先笑然後轉到石牆後大哭
我竟然不爭氣的被感動了啊 XDDDDD
看的出來作者在這篇想要堆疊眾角色的小故事
去營造獲得自由的感動
但真的要奉勸尾大
還是專注在描述少數幾個人的故事就好
目前看來是還無法駕馭這麼多人的大場面啊
回顧這陣子
其實感動的地方不少
明哥幹部的故事
羅的故事
居魯士的故事
這些都很不錯
只是都被雜亂的支線
和不太合理的鳥籠壓過去了
如果是單行本一次看完
應該是蠻感人的~
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