[句子] 改寫 it is ... that 句型
Compared to the digital camera, the way traditional camera develops pictures
and the maintenance of its pictures is less easy.
這句 要怎麼改成 分裂句 強調句型呢?
因為這句子 一看就覺得頭太重 是典型的頭重腳輕句型
在英文寫作中算不上好句子 所以 我才想改寫他 無奈卻遇到瓶頸
我試著寫成
it is less easy for? the way traditional camera develops pictures
and the maintenance of its pictures.
or
The way traditional camera develops pictures and the maintenance of
its pictures is less easy than those of digital camera.
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