Re: [心得] 碎星誌(雷至6-25)
: 推 fireefax119: 在實體書發行前,吃獸人那段不順之處有機會微調嗎 03/10 14:31
: → fireefax119: 喜歡羅大的觀點,但角色間的衝擊,有點生硬 03/10 14:33
就我個人情感而言,沒有!
也不覺得有什麼必須要改的,那段挺好,
如所需要的效果一樣,讓幾個人物的情緒都動起來了。
不過,多聽聽不同想法也不是壞事,
你可以說出你認為好的改法,
如果我認同,我會把你的建議交給出版社,讓他們去修稿。
※ 編輯: roson (14.20.146.187), 03/10/2016 17:51:08
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