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1.運動的好處
2.你最喜歡做什麼運動,為什麼?
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There are many advantages for us to do exercise every day. First, we can keep
healthy via doing exercise regularly. Second, If you want to be in a good
shape, it is one of the great medicine much more effective than healthy
products. Third, you can also make a lot of congenial friends with common
hobbies.
Both baseball and basketball are my favorite sports. I had crushed on playing
baseball since I saw the cartoon-Major in elementary school. I really admire
the main characters in this cartoon, their awesome performance in
competitions and friendship made me envy. I played it very hard in order to
become the cartoons character-Honda. Although it doesn’t have many
opportunities to play baseball now, I still watch profession games on
television.
On the other hand, I also like to play basketball because the sports is easy
to play for me. When I made a three-points shots, I could get much of
accomplishment from it.
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