Re: cvs commit: www/en/news/status report-2011-07-2011-09.xml

On Mon, 7 Nov 2011 18:17:23 -0500 (EST)
Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> wrote:

> On Mon, 7 Nov 2011, Aleksandr Rybalko wrote:
> 
> > On Sun, 6 Nov 2011 23:41:35 -0500 (EST)
> > Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> wrote:
> >
> >>> @@ -1209,10 +1209,11 @@
> >>>      </links>
> >>>
> >>>      <body>
> >>> -      <p>Many embedded devices have Ethernet switch on board,
> >>> same take a
> >>> -	place on some multiports NICs, switch framework designed
> >>> to give
> >>> -	ability to user easily control basic futures that
> >>> management
> >>> -	switches have, such a VLANs, QOS, port mirroring, etc.
> >>> Currently we
> >>> +      <p>Many embedded devices have an Ethernet switch on board;
> >>> +	in some ways this is similar to some multiport NICs.
> >>> +	A switch framework is designed to give users the ability
> >>> to easily
> >>> +	control basic features present in managed switches, such
> >>> as
> >>> +	VLANs, QoS, port mirroring, etc.  Currently we are
> >>>  	able to control only VLANs on:</p>
> >
> > Here is not exact what I mean,
> > By phrase "same take a place on some multiports NICs" I mean some
> > multiport NIC's have attached Ethernet switch to it, so single PCI
> > NIC chip communicate with one port of this switch, but other switch
> > ports connected to external RJ45 connectors.
> >
> 
> Ah, I see -- thank you for correcting me.
> 
> > So maybe better to say: "Some multiport NICs also have embedded
> > Ethernet switch"?
> 
> With that change, this paragraph would become:
> <p>Many embedded devices have an Ethernet switch on board;
> such switches are even embedded on some multiport NICs.
> This embedded switch framework is designed to give users the ability
> to easily control basic features present in managed switches, such as
> VLANs, QoS, port mirroring, etc.  Currently we are
> able to control only VLANs on:</p>
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> -Ben

Yeah, that fine.

Thank you so much!

WBW
-- 
Aleksandr Rybalko <ray@ddteam.net>
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