Re: cvs commit: www/en/news/status report-2011-07-2011-09.xml

On Sun, 6 Nov 2011 23:41:35 -0500 (EST)
Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> wrote:

>> On Sat, 5 Nov 2011, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
>> 
>> > danger      2011-11-05 14:59:08 UTC
>> >
>> >  FreeBSD doc repository
>> >
>> >  Added files:
>> >    en/news/status       report-2011-07-2011-09.xml
>> >  Log:
>> >  - add the status report for Q3/2011
>> >
>> >  Please review. I'd like to connect it to the build and release it
>> > on Monday
>> 
>> Hi Daniel,
>> 
>> The attached patch runs something resembling a grammar comb over the 
>> entries.
>> 
>> I worry that I have changed the meaning of the Ethernet Switch
>> Framework entry, though -- it was quite hard to make sense of.
>> 
>> I probably missed some things, though.
>> 
>> -Ben Kaduk

Hi,

thank you for review Ben!

>> @@ -1129,9 +1129,9 @@
>>      </links>
>>  
>>      <body>
>> -      <p>ZRouter.org is a young project that targeting to produce
>> &os;
>> +      <p>ZRouter.org is a young project that aims to produce &os;
>>  	based firmware for small boxes such a SOHO router, APs,
>> etc.  At
>> -	present time ZRouter.org able to build working firmware
>> for:</p>
>> +	the present time ZRouter.org is able to build working
>> firmware for:</p> 
>>        <ul>
>>  	<li>D-Link DAP-1350</li>

Fine!

>> @@ -1209,10 +1209,11 @@
>>      </links>
>>  
>>      <body>
>> -      <p>Many embedded devices have Ethernet switch on board, same
>> take a
>> -	place on some multiports NICs, switch framework designed to
>> give
>> -	ability to user easily control basic futures that management
>> -	switches have, such a VLANs, QOS, port mirroring, etc.
>> Currently we
>> +      <p>Many embedded devices have an Ethernet switch on board;
>> +	in some ways this is similar to some multiport NICs.
>> +	A switch framework is designed to give users the ability to
>> easily
>> +	control basic features present in managed switches, such as
>> +	VLANs, QoS, port mirroring, etc.  Currently we are
>>  	able to control only VLANs on:</p>

Here is not exact what I mean, 
By phrase "same take a place on some multiports NICs" I mean some
multiport NIC's have attached Ethernet switch to it, so single PCI NIC
chip communicate with one port of this switch, but other switch ports
connected to external RJ45 connectors. 

So maybe better to say: "Some multiport NICs also have embedded
Ethernet switch"?

Sorry for my English :)

>>  
>>        <ul>
>> @@ -1230,7 +1231,7 @@
>>      <help>
>>        <task>Fix AR8216/AR8316 driver</task>
>>        <task>Fix BCM5325 driver, not all ports pass data</task>
>> -      <task>Add tick handler for RTL8309 to auto unisolate
>> ports</task>
>> +      <task>Add tick handler for RTL8309 to automatically unisolate
>> ports</task> <task>Unify MIB statistic counters access</task>
>>        <task>Add mii read/write bus methods</task>
>>        <task>Implement pseudo interfaces for switch PHYs</task>

Fine.

Thanks again!

WBW
-- 
Alexandr Rybalko <ray@dlink.ua> 
aka Alex RAY <ray@ddteam.net>
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